Parental, societal and economic pressure and its correlation with

Parental, societal and economic pressure and its correlation with depression and anxiety levels in postgraduate students of Nanjing University.

 
What my teacher said” First, there are two parts that need to be expanded: anxiety and stress in literature review, and discussion sections. Second, you use only one question to ask two factors impact pressure – the family and society. That is too directly and briefly, and have less power to support your hypophyses. Third, you also mentioned in review the most important source for subject stressor is job, but this variable are not directly involved. In real life, there is also pressure directly from the graduate employment, rather than academic. Employer usually emphasis work experience and practical ability during recruit new employee. Fouth, thesis should follow APA style (sixth version). Please see attachment for more detail suggestions.

You dont need to do Chapter 2. I already started doing it. I want this to be concentrated on the rest of the research paper,
PD” I know the title of my paper says thesis, but this is more of a research paper, as a chinese university, they let you plagiarize up to 30% of the paper, they let you do the thesis dissertation in 20 minutes, and you have yo bribe the professors if you want their help. The quality of this “Thesis” is the same as a research paper.

General Instructions

First. I need to shorten the abstract, second I need to add more literature review. Third, in the part of “Ecological Theory” I need to add more info about this theory, and talk about how it has been used previously in the area of psychology. Also, I have to have lots of references (about 30) from this ecological theory in the area of psychology. This is the most important part, because one of the professors told me that this Ecological theory needs to be supported. Also, Need to strengthen the hypothesis or change it to make it stronger. Lastly, Expand the “discussion” part.

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$B”*(Bformat has to be apa 6th version
if some of the the hypothesis are not strong enough you can try making them stronger using the most convenient way.
Footnotes need to be added
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